Forever We Can Hold Eachother

• Artist: Cognuisance
• Description: I wrote this as a love poem for a girl I was in a long distance relationship with. She's moved down here since then but at the time I wanted to write something to tell her how I felt. I feel it's one of my better pieces so I wanted to see what the general public thought of it. The full name is "And Forever We Can Hold Eachother" but I had to shorten it due to size restrictions.
• Date: 02/05/2009
• Tags: forever hold eachother

Torn
Ripped asunder
I feel as though I could collapse under
The weight of the world on my back
Fatigue causing my heart to crack
A single image in my mind
Serving the purpose to remind

Me
That though we're miles apart
We still beat with a single heart
A simple tool
But for this young fool
That simple machine
Has the power to clean

Away
Any doubt and any fear
Everything becomes so clear
Like a lucid dream
Everything begins to seem
More abstract
But still in tact

Giving Me
A new resolve
Mathematically I solve
To never stagger and never sway
Persevering to see the day
I see your face
And we embrace

Happiness
Entering me so profound
I won't hear a single sound
Lost forever in that time
A feeling so sublime
Your soft touch enough for me
To quite plainly see

That
I want this to be forever
And for that I will endeavor
Moving through life's desert sand
Moving towards that perfect land
It's just one foot in front of the other
And forever we can hold each other.

Comments

[lime green pop]

i love it soo much!!!

[-SailorLillith-]

she must be very happy. its very good.

[snowtiger2]

i adore it 5/5