Graduation

• Artist: Princesses Allelujah
• Description: yes this is suppose to end this way so you understand....comment if you like and yes i cannot wait..... any way i was thinking about it so i decided to write a poem about it i thought that would be cool i mean it fits who i am
• Date: 02/03/2009
• Tags: graduation

The day has come

excitement and tears in my eyes

field with joy

i made it this fare

to the very end

as i walk down the isle

many faces and many applause

people wishing me well

taking one last look at my teachers
and saying goodbye to my school

now i am on my way out of high school

its my dream

only one more year to go
and all this will be

i hope i achieve my goal

Comments

[Mutandanstan]

Agreed with Seval9.

[Airien_sama]

You spelled a few things wrong and it is a bit of an abrubt ending, but otherwise you expressed your feeling, and I think it is good.