Silent

• Artist: Kimono325
• Description: Okay...for once (and this is totally embarrassing) this poem I wrote is actually about someone....someone from my school...I've....kinda liked him for three years, and this poem applies to me completely, which is why I wrote it.
• Date: 02/03/2009
• Tags: silent crush school love

I'm there.
So close, so far.
I feel those simple words,
burning strongly on my tongue.
I wish to share them with you,
my long-kept secret.
But then, you turn your head towards me.
Eyes of rich, deep chocolate,
bright and so alive.
The smile that makes music inside my heart.
I feel the flush in my cheeks,
my confession forgotten.
Will you never know?
Will I never find the courage to tell you?
"I like you"
No, that isn't enough.
But, could I say the words I truly feel?
Not yet.
One day, just maybe...
I will be able to put my feelings to words,
just for you.
You will know.
But...would you laugh?
Would...you just turn away?
I can't know for sure.
But, until then.
My love is silent.

Comments

[BarlowGirl3]

okay.. I know you wrote this for your life, but I'm pretty sure you actually wrote it for mine. There's a guy at my school I like too. His smile makes my heart sing (and he also has brown eyes, but so do half the guys in the world). Anyway, thanks for writing this. It's awesome.

[Jolene023]

It is hard to tell someone that you like them, especially when you yourself are shy; this poem explains what us shy persons experience all the time.

[ShivasShivaShiva]

I love it, I know how you feel too and yea it can be a bit embaressing and the outcome is nerve wrecking.

I like the way you kept your stanza's, it kind of reminds me of a heart beat with the emotion in it. When your thinking of telling him your heart veat increases with adrenline but when it comes down to it fear slows it down. 5/5

[TwilightXxXTwilight]

the thought are like they wanna come out but they cant becuz you are afraid