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Wander long halls in search for something
Steps stumbling, darkness slowly consuming
A while lost, blind
Could you help me to find
The way, a path of assurance?
Similars share pain and comfort, mostly sympathy
Glitching eyes starve for what one mistakenly finds
Quickly walking past
But don’t ever ask
Something's stirring in a glass slowly filling
Likeness of interest and sharing of thoughts
An ally with the force to consume smaller country
Grown up side-by-side
Connected for life
Needing defense against the coming
Startling eyes find me, lights instinct inside
Soft gentile touches create thirst for warmth
Please help me see
With you I feel free
Guide me through in one piece
Find yourself, child, seek what is desired
Reach further into the dark, and do not be afraid
Pure moments of bliss
And everything to miss;
A perfect fate to be meant for.
Water flows true and overflows cup
Knife plunges deep, familiar face wielder
Voices echo though the phone
I’m still so alone
And bleeding of pain from once brethren.
A kind of hate, love, resentment, though blood semblance
Trust turned to dust with turned tables and deceit
Knowing every secret,
Power exposes weakness
Chains so tempting to snap
Tenderness taunt, tease tormented mind
Sweet warm breath whispers goodbyes
It’s a way through that I seek
Without you I grow weak
Keep my glass heart from falling
Wander endlessly through thicket in search to find something
Thorns brush numb skin, but no pain surges through
Forever lost in mind
Can you help me to find
Some way out, some way back through the bleak?
- by AkaruiRain |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/31/2009 |
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- Title: Some Way Out
- Artist: AkaruiRain
- Description: Well I did this for my English Class... We were studying the Robert Frost poem The Road Not Taken, and we had to come up with our own metaphor for life... She was really talking about an object to compare my life to but I couldn't think of any "object", so I did mine on the action of wandering through darkness. I really didn't know how to put that in object-form so I just left it alone. I liked it, though some of the lines still bother me... No, it doesnt rhyme but for two lines in each stanza.
- Date: 01/31/2009
- Tags: poem english
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Reo Ann 567 - 03/13/2009
- i think its really good. i like it los
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- WinterludeChaos - 02/23/2009
- i like it!
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- brenden-leel - 02/01/2009
- it is amazing and i would like to take a copy of it if its ok i will swear i will not say it was me who wrote it but an amazing wordsmith that could write down feelings of many as though she understood everyone in the pain of love. and drepression
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