Little, Lonely Hummingbird

• Artist: EverestBeverest
• Description: wrote it with the hours i had after taking exams :P hope you guys enjoy it
• Date: 01/27/2009
• Tags: little lonely hummingbird

Flitter little hummingbird
Living, dying, free.
Tiptoe through my tulips
Out the window, you I see


You’re nature’s subtle drummer boy
The steel drum that’s your heart,
Creates a constant thrumming sound
Composed of different parts


I envy you, the hummingbird
I wish I had your heart,
I wish that mine was strong enough
To never fall apart


I wish that I could flap my arms
So fast that I could fly,
I wish that I could dance and live
With you up in the sky.


But then I start to wonder
If your heart so tough and strong,
Is tired from the beatings
That it’s taking all day long


And I’ve never seen a lady bird
Or Chiclets fly with you,
I wonder if you’re all alone
And your heart is hurting too

Comments

[Sukuhi]

I got so excited when I noticed you had submitted something new. I like it a lot - as always - so of course you get a five out of five. *favorites*

I like how it sort of goes to an irregular beat. Normally I don't like it, but you made it sound, well, good. I envy your writing skills. razz