Lonely Vampire

• Artist: ayoxamy
• Description: i wrote this at like... 2 in the morning. i was happy with myself for writing something like this while half asleep, though this isn't my best work, persay
• Date: 01/25/2009
• Tags: lonely vampire

A lonely vampire with no soul
How long until he dies so old
Lost without such as a glance
Broken until, without a chance
Caught in the rain, bleak and dreary
Misses life, and has grown weary
Lonely vampire, with no soul
I'll keep you here, until so old
By my side, here you'll stay
Nothing will be in our way
Until confliction rises above
What will happen to our love?
Lonely vampire with no soul
You will never grow so old
For 'tis I who must leave
Growing old, as time concedes
Leave you I must, though I protest
Life has its way, I must confess
Lonely vampire with no soul
I'll love you forever, or so you are told...

Comments

[. [ S . i . r . e . n ] .]

Not bad... The first half was better than the second. I'd cut it off before you talk about confliction rising above.

Oh! Punctuate the ends of your lines, too. You want periods every so often, you really do.

[Moonlight_Maiden123]

cool! that was very sad, but very well written a 5/5 for u ^^