Life as it is

• Artist: x-KraziBrat
• Description: First poem I had ever made(:
  
  I hope you like it<3
• Date: 01/24/2009
• Tags: life

I really try to hide
The fear in my eyes
But all I do is cry
Do I really deserve this kind of life
When all I am waiting for is a scythe
I sit here alone putting a smile on my face
When I'm actually screaming "Get me out of this place"
I don't know if my friends even care
While at school all I get are stares
Teachers wondering about my bruises and scars
When all I want is to go abroad and far
Away from this place
And not to look at anyone in this place
The lies I've been told
While another story unfolds..

Comments

[shoebat]

I really think it's a great poem; however, I really think the rhyme takes away from it though. Try to write some prose, I found it a lot easier, and, in my opinion, more expressive.

~shoebat

[pheonixrulez]

go sis woooooooooooooooooooo