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I walk the path of darkness and death alone
The illuminating light of pure fades in black
The voice of the savior echoes in the dark abyss
Leaving amidst the forgotten and the deceased
Treading this path in hopes and lies
I smell the stench of flesh and blood
I hear the chimes of tempt and sin
I see the forgotten and the damned
I clutched to the chains of bones and flesh
I quenched my thirst to the taste of blood
I feed my soul with death and lies
I drowned myself in violence and gore
I see the savior in skulls and bones
I reached up for guidance and salvation
I stood up for faith and strength
I prayed for absolution and forgiveness
I reached the end of sorrow and death
And opened the door to salvation and peace
That brought me up to tranquility eternal
Carried by the angels so good in deed
Saved by the saints so pure in heart
My soul now rest at peace
For deliverance has been served
For the tormented soul so poor
- by Lonely Adie |
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- | Submitted on 01/22/2009 |
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- Title: ~Darkness~
- Artist: Lonely Adie
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- Date: 01/22/2009
- Tags: darkness
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Comments (7 Comments)
- LynSayzWTF - 06/23/2009
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I really like this... This is the first long poem i ever read or liked... wink
Good job... whee - Report As Spam
- Fipll - 06/23/2009
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You have alot of talent! Using more imagery would change the effect, so try to use a little more.
I hope you are going to pursue writing as a career! - Report As Spam
- slipknot_gurl_8 - 01/26/2009
- wow thats really deep i like it alot
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- hinata hyuga fan-me - 01/26/2009
- ... not 1 of my words could ever express the feelings in this story.
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- mimko22 - 01/25/2009
- amazing
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- Reprogrammed - 01/24/2009
- very deep. I really like it.
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- Sabaism - 01/22/2009
- profound
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