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The girl in white
cried all night.
Never to be seen again.
I saw her once
and wondered who she was.
This guy she meet
broke her heart.
She just lost all hope.
I never thought it would
end this way.
But not everyone gets a happy ending.
Am i right?
- by Freaked Glitter |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/21/2009 |
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- Title: The Girl In white
- Artist: Freaked Glitter
- Description: i really just made this up at the spur-of-the-moment. If you like it, cool. if you don't, thats ok. I don't really do poetry
- Date: 01/21/2009
- Tags: girl white
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Comments (2 Comments)
- lil pixy girl - 01/21/2010
- It's good, but the last line doesn't sound quite right, maybe if you used enjambment leading into it and decapitalised the start of it?
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- XxBeautifulxLiesxX - 01/25/2009
- thts good.i love it.check out some of mine,k?lol.5/5
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