This pain inside my heart

• Artist: shirley_5564
• Description: This is how i felt after my boy friend broke up with me
• Date: 01/18/2009
• Tags: pain inside heart

i feel pain
i feel sorrow
it is so hard to breath
what is happening to me
i cant seem to die
but i also dont wanna be alive
will someone please save me
from the sadness inside

Comments

[writerprincess29]

Not bad. I like the concept

[MysticHoneyRose]

Not bad Shirley,hmm I should try and enter my poem in.

[Lost - kun]

first comment D<