Issinfree

• Artist: m!mi
• Description: (prounounced ihzinfree)
  The poem isnt really a representation of the picture, i was just influenced by it. This is my most recent poem and i figured "what the heck, y not submit it". i hope you like it and constructive criticism is always welcome. :]
• Date: 01/17/2009
• Tags: issenfree emerald dazzlingboy

Take me up to Issinfree
Where emerald shadows dance
Take me up to Issinfree
Where spirits find romance
Take me up to Issinfree
To find a dazzling boy
Let me find him on a branch
Grasping for a joy
Vines caressing ivory tint
Would chase sane minds away
But fear should not let consciousness set the mind astray
Upon my shoulder you may lay an icy, tear stained cheek
Together Issinfree is ours, until I’m forced to wake

Comments

[Miellee]

I like that you repeat the certain line. It shows tat it has importance.
And overall I like the theme. Good work!