Which would you rather have?

• Artist: Amaris__Issa
• Description: I found out today that my brother got suspended for fighting, and I figured it was because of his so-called 'friends,' so I wrote this poem.
  Some of it doesn't rhyme, but I tried. ^.^
  Leave me a comment on what you think! Contructive Critisism only. ^.^ I don't know if I spelled those words right, so...yeah. ^.^
• Date: 01/12/2009
• Tags: just think

Bro look at your life,
it used to be just right,
then your 'friends' came back around,
now your life, is going down.


You just got suspended,
for getting in a fight.
You just got suspended,
and you knew it wasn't right


I don't get it...
Why do you always want to be with them?
I don't get it...
Don't you see their always wrong?


Just think about it, big bro...
Tony was on house arrest, for armed robbery.
Autumn went to jail for the robbery.
Do you want to be like them?
I sure hope not.


Just think about what your life can be.
You don't need them
All their doing is pulling you down.
Just think...You have family who loves you
They have a family who hates them.


Which would you rather have?

Comments

[Saveyourownlifefirst]

It was really good. A little bit choppy towards the end, but you could still understand the meaning so it was quite good. 4