That Final Day

• Artist: SillyySceneeGurll
• Description: Okae, so i made this poem. But its kinda based on, like teenage romance (or sumthing....). It duzent hav anything to do with my love life, i just wanted to write this because i was pretty depressed that time.
  Its confusing in the middle. When the boy said he loves her to the girl, she stops loving him....Because, when she thought he didn't love her back, he did, but she didnt know what to do but stop her loving for him. It's pretty confusing at first....but you'll catch on sumtime. Lolz.
• Date: 01/09/2009
• Tags: final

I love you.
I loved you ever since you walked through the hallway,
smiling.
I knew you didnt love me back.
But I still loved you.
When you sat in front of me in class,
when you passed by me in the hallway not even noticing me,
when you didnt even know i existed.
I still loved you.
But on that final day, when you told me you loved me,
i stopped loving you.
I stopped, because you didn't even show that you loved me back.
You didnt show that you loved me in anyway,
you just showed me how to hate instead of love.
You kept on trying to do stuff to make me forgive you,
but it didn't work.
Until, you said something to me.
Something that I've been waiting so long for.
You said sorry.
Now I love you again.
But that still doesn't change the way I felt on that final day.

Comments

[ll Disenchanted ll]

that was kinda interesting....

[SillyySceneeGurll]

Thanx both ov yoo. (//.^)

[captain sora29]

that was really good you should be a perfesional!!

[Brain shooting Blanks]

whoa
at first it made me think a day in seventh grade
and basically the second half of seventh grade
and day i will remember forever
but then it got scary crazy
and i didnt really get it when he told you he loved u
and you hated him for it
so i kinda filled in the blanks in my head
and made up my own story to go along with it
so it made sense to me
kinda
anyways
i really liked it
so i give it an outstanding
5 stars