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Closure is a noose, I’m finding now.
I am breaking loose and crying out.
It fits like a tragedy.
In the mirror I can see..
My feet are light, as a dancer’s are..
Present now amongst the stars.
Just inches beyond the cold, hard concrete
Of your twisted middle ground.
Tighter is this closure..
For I am ready now.
Growing distant, is this music-
My slow and somber song.
I am finding my place,
For once I did not belong…
Yes, Mirror, Mirror, I can see..
This noose fits like a tragedy.
- Title: Fits Like A Tragedy
- Artist: _Roooose_
- Description: Comment D;
- Date: 01/09/2009
- Tags: fits like tragedy
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Cottoncandyocbra3 - 01/25/2009
- One of my favorite of your poems,actually. Deeply enjoyed the end.
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- Kibroth - 01/16/2009
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I held my breath through the whole reading.
Excellent work, you are quite a talented writer.
5/5 (a first...!)
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- CannibalWizards - 01/11/2009
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YAY!
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