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Rain falls, lightning strikes,
Deep in my mind tonight.
I can't sleep, I'm wide awake,
and all I can do is shiver and shake.
I can't bare it, it kills me to know,
that my love is crying so.
I want to be there, I hate it here,
but I can't shed a single tear.
I've heard her cry, and at the same time,
the storm is growing in my mind.
A battle is raging, I'm going insane,
I can't tell what's different, or what is the same.
My life is off balance, it's hard to tell,
whether I'm living in heaven or hell.
I love her so much, but I hate it here too,
I hate it dear, because I can't be with you.
Every time I hear her tears,
My mind floods with even more fears.
The storm rushes, through my veins,
The blood pours out, like acid rain.
Lying awake with blood-shot eyes,
I can hear it, I feel it, when she cries.
So many miles away, we're so far apart,
but I can feel the drops of acid, landing on my heart.
The tears, like acid, destroying my skin,
and yet I feel nothing, until it seeps within.
When they reach my heart, and slip inside,
and find the pain, which I've tried to hide.
These tears of hers, see how I really feel,
they know about my smile, how it's not real.
They burn through my body, creating a hole,
and dwell in the crevices, of my broken, exposed soul.
I love her, I honestly do,
and some of these feelings, aren't always true,
but even though I'm not, I feel so alone,
like a lost dog, that can't find it's home.
Searching and whining, whimpering, so afraid,
wandering through shadows, living in the shade.
Those shadows, are like hideouts, free of any pain,
that get destroyed and exposed, by those tears of acid rain.
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- Title: Acid Rain
- Artist: Killvin
- Description: ... well, I titled this poem what I did, and you'll see why after reading it. This is how I feel sometimes... and I got bored in school, again, so.... here.
- Date: 01/08/2009
- Tags: acid rain
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Yami Kisei - 03/28/2009
- you are talented...lol i really love reading your poetry,,i relate my life to it...ahhh stop having things in common with me!!!!!!
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- Foxy_Vampiress - 02/04/2009
- Erika whereever you are know this is a really awesome guy. I am proud to call him my friend. I hope you are not really far away. Nicely written piece.
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- I LAWLY I - 01/08/2009
- wow...good job killvin..love it..srry but im sorta speechless rite now...xD
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- boba fett352 - 01/08/2009
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XD i think you know how i read poems.
and it looks like you got rid of all the vhats and vheres, and all those other things i made fun of. i give acid rain a 5 out of 5. XD i fell like adam sessler and morgan webb reviewing a game on x-play. - Report As Spam
- Emperess_of_the_Night - 01/08/2009
- I'm sorry that i cause you so much pain. I don't mean to cry, i don't mean to let it show. I'm sorry that it hurts you so. I don't mean to inflict on you this pain that won't go, and i'm sorry that i do. Tell me how i can help, how i can fix it. whatever it is i will do it. Willingly and with out a single greif. I want to do whatever i can to help solve this pain that you feel.
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