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i loved him.
he loved me too,
at some point in this murder.
he said he cared.
he said he would do any thing for me.
he said we would be together forever.
but,
that all crumbled away.
was i not good enough...?
was i moving too slow...?
was i not pretty enough..?
was i not perfect any more..?
but now,
he has his sights set on,
my best friend.
and she likes him too..
so..
am i just..
no one...?
do i not matter?
i guess not.
because that night,
he broke up with me,
and i was with her..
and he asked her out that very night.
and thats when,
i was murdered.
my soul was murdered.
my heart was murdered..
and he didnt care.
and i dont even think she cares.
she sure doesnt show that she does.
so,
with my death,
my murder,
my funeral only brought,
tears of joy...
and he got away with murder....
- by Daddy Got This Account |
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- | Submitted on 01/05/2009 |
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- Title: the muderer and the murdered
- Artist: Daddy Got This Account
- Description: okay so i am felling a smidge under the weather. ^^" so, im going to tell u the story of how my heart was murdered.
- Date: 01/05/2009
- Tags: muderer murdered
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Comments (7 Comments)
- 290DarkStars - 05/21/2009
- ouch... thats gotta leave a burn DX. sorry..
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- Daddy Got This Account - 04/02/2009
- no, this poem reflects the night i was with my best friend at her house, and he broke up with me, via text, and asked her out that night too.
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- 290DarkStars - 04/01/2009
- Man, With each poem that i read, the more that I realise. You are like a duplacate of me in emotions at this point. I have wrote poems such as "S*um Like You" thinking about the thievs tat get away with crimes like this. I'm sorry for what happened to cause this emotion, even if it wasn't litterally this.
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- Deshi_Venshin594 - 02/18/2009
- i agree with not average he gave up someone he shouldnt have and was a real jerk the poetry is great so just keep expressing yourself
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- RisexWithxthexDead - 01/16/2009
- aww sooo sad. This is the second poem of urs tht i read and just likeother one it gets a perfect 5.
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- Drowkyez - 01/11/2009
- aww sad very sad. i like it a lot. especially at the end. very nice ^_^
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- XxNot Your_Average GirlxX - 01/07/2009
- beautiful and that man you dated was a jerk and lost a girl with utter talent.
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