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I cant look away
Those deep amber eyes
Draw me in so deep.
Look into my eyes
What do you see
The love that is unexplainable.
The love that runs so deep it hurts
When you are gone.
Deep amber eyes that melt
My heart, makes me warm
Touches my soul.
I am incomplete without you
My love those deep amber eyes
I love so much that words
cannot explain.
heart
- by BloodyBlackAbyss |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/01/2009 |
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- Title: Deep Amber Eyes
- Artist: BloodyBlackAbyss
- Description: this is a poem about how i feel about my fiancee.
- Date: 01/01/2009
- Tags: deep amber eyes
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Comments (4 Comments)
- MalevolentChocolate - 09/23/2009
- Hmmm... I liked it okay, but I just didn't FEEL it. I dunno... it just seemed as though you were just writing words down on a page (or, in this case, typing words... but... you get what I mean), and you didn't really have any idea what the poem meant.
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- goldenheart8 - 03/09/2009
- Love it. It's perfect. biggrin 5/5. Keep up the good work.
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- RainingMusicDawn - 01/02/2009
- it flows so well. i love it. it's great u need to keep writing!
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- whitejade13 - 01/02/2009
- Oh this is so sweet. very nice. smile
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