Tears of Blood

• Artist: iStab Crayons
• Description: Something that just popped into my head. I thought i would write it down. Enjoy. Comments wanted.
• Date: 01/01/2009
• Tags: tears blood

I cry tears of Blood,
I see you walking,
You whisper to me that you will protect me,
You hold me in your arms,
All I feel is happiness,
The tears of Blood dry up,
I thought we were in love,
that you would protect me,
not harm me,
That you wouldn't leave,
That we would stay together forever,
Then you left me, For her,
I loved you,
And you left me,
I cry tears of blood,
I see you walking back,
you try to talk to me,
To get me back,
All i do and yell is "Its to late!"
You turn and walk slowly back,
I cry tears of Blood

Comments

[covis101]

this is really good!! great job!!

[iStab Crayons]

I capitilized the b because it is in the name of the poem more often. No I did not get stabbed.

[Gerard_Ray_Frank]

Tears of Blood? Why did you capitilize the b? And were you stabbed or something?

[Creepy Gabriella]

I love it. Very emotional and I know exactly how it feels. Very well written.

[rayne the vampire hottie]

woow thats sad. i loved it. ^_^