True Suicidal Thought!

• Artist: cupcake_ninja08
• Description: Okay this sounds really gothic and emo, I wanted to write a poem from a perspective of someone who is suicidal! This may offend some people, if it does I am sorry, but please don't bash the poem, please rate and comment fairly! Thank you!
• Date: 01/01/2009
• Tags: true suicidal thought

Cutting my wrists with a razor so dull and rusty,

the smell so enticing and musty

The blood flows down my arm,

I don't even care if I am doing myself harm!


The darkness around me and all my evil thoughts

that my tormented heart has bought,

of flesh, blood, and rot!

The true side of suicidal thought!


The blood so red and hot is spilling out,

I smile wanting to laugh out loud!

I watch the pool of red grow all around me,

I don't even care that I am dying!


My eyes are bleeding tears of blood,

of hatred and not of love!

Everything I see turns red,

a sign that means I soon be dead!


Now my corpse lies on the floor,

with a puddle of blood flowing out my door.

I look down and see upon my face,

a smile not of pleasure, but a frown of disgrace!

Comments

[cupcake_ninja08]

Sorry to hear about your Dad, I had a grandfather that committed suicide so it is not an easy topic to talk about...anyways thanks for the comment.

[sinister_sunshine]

thats a whole new perspective on suicide to me, ya see, my dad committed suicide, but he didnt use a razor, he used a gun, thank you for ur gruesome creative!!

[cupcake_ninja08]

thanks Missy!

[missyrocksurlife]

wow katie this rocks! i remember u telling me about this at olive garden yesterday. i like this one alot.

[cupcake_ninja08]

thank you for all your comments, and Rayne I am so sorry about your friend, but honestly when I was writing this I wasn't trying to offend anyone, so I am sorry, but again thanks for the comments!

[-Kingdom of Nothingness-]

I like the darkness.

[rayne the vampire hottie]

i love the emotion in it.... i had a friend comitte suicide. i really dont like things that involve that. but i loved this poem. ^_^