Fallen

• Artist: Kurama Aishiteru
• Description: It's a poem I wrote about loving an impossible love. When your love isn't returned but you continue to fall for them and also to your demise.
  
  Sorry had the description and the poem flipped for a while
  
• Date: 12/31/2008
• Tags: fallen

I'm high in the sky
But now I'm falling
I am cold and emotionless
But I am full of feelings
These feeling are not my own
But those of my loves
I've taken all their heartache
But given them joy
My happiness was lost
But a friendship was gained
I've fallen for her
But she can not love back
I wish she could
But I'm not the one
So I will continue to fall
But the ground is closing fast
I hope I will survive
But I know how this will end

Comments

[Kurama Aishiteru]

Cool I got criticism and praise. Eh twas my first poem I wrote in forever so I'll take it all. Thanks to all.

[dmaticic]

I like it. Perhaps it is because I am now in love with someone who will never love me back, but I also like some of your language.

[CrystalBlue101]

Im not trying to be mean but that was the most pointless poem ever. Your too much of and inspirational people dont like love poems like that they like funny.

[maddiez88]

that is the most awful poem ever