Sick.

• Artist: Cottoncandyocbra3
• Description: Bleak as hell....
• Date: 12/30/2008
• Tags: sick

I'd kill myself if I didn't hate my face,
I'm sick of this pitiful human race,

Innocence faded, day of dread,
standing by as the pool runs red,

Confidence broken into a shard,
life is getting pretty hard,

Cant stop today, I'll repent tomorrow,
for now I need to bask in sorrow,

When I see the children die,
I don't care, I don't know why,

Unfeeling corpse, am I alive?,
for anything, I do not strive,

Pointless drifting, seems like years,
I'd like to cry, but don't have tears,

I keep fueling my selfish ways,
choking on karma's dirty haze,

melancholy falls on my breath,
as I wait here for my death

Sinking much lower every night,
revel in sadness, what a sight!

desolate thoughts, mind is weak,
my future's looking very bleak,

What does it matter if I never fly?
sooner or later I'm going to die...

Comments

[popololomama]

Very listless. Emo. But i tottally get it. Sad but true.

[Bleuraven123]

uuhh... I think poetry is not always about your feelings... I can write poetry too even if that's not how I feel...
Great poem, Alitare

[whitejade13]

I won't ask if this is how you are feeling. Obviously if i don't know i didn't read the poem right. Isn't poetry infact just your feelings put into words? It' a........ my mind draws up blank when i try to describe this. I just know that i certaintly appreciate it. 5/5 always.

[Sorceress_Wakaru]

I'll ask the same question as the others have. Is this what you are feeling? Until now? You are waiting for death because you fear to take away your life. You see the world of suffering pass by you, but you are void of emotion like a lifeless doll. It is because you do not even care if you are alive or dead but you are waiting for death. You want to embrace it like it was a part of you yet you do not want to feel pain. Have I interpreted it right?

[iiReina]

is this how you're feeling?! D; 5/5

[Bleuraven123]

*sigh*
You're really so depressed, aren't you? Poor thing...
And yet you still manage to create such a masterpiece!!