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Swaying tree
Swaying tree looks around
It sees Wind
Swaying tree asks wind why he sways.
Wind replies with a gust
Swaying trees leaves shake and fall
Swaying tree looses another part of him
Swaying tree’s leaves shake and fall
Again
And again
And again
All that’s left swaying of Swaying tree is empty dark branches
Wind just blows another gust
Swaying tree’s roots start to crack like whips and snap
Swaying tree battles with Wind
Wind blows gusts harder
Swaying tree holds tight to Ground
Wind pushes harder
Swaying tree pushes back
Wind whistles past Swaying tree
Swaying tree’s roots crack and snap again
Swaying tree pulls himself to Ground once more
He grabs but looses grip on Ground
He grabs
And grabs
And grabs
But Ground keeps running between his roots
Swaying tree can fight no longer
The roots stop gripping
Ground tries to pull the roots back but the roots refuse
The mighty Swaying tree falls loudly and hits the ground with such force that a Richter could pick it up
Swaying tree’s branches no longer sway
Long time passes and Wind, Ground, and life have forgotten him
Rain observes the fallen Swaying tree
Rain erodes Swaying tree
A small pile of rotten wood is all that’s left
Fire observes the rotten pile of Swaying tree
Fire also observes the rest of Swaying tree’s forgotten friends
Fire sweeps up the little bits and pieces left of Swaying tree
Charred remains are all that’s left
Within those charred remains there is a seed
And from the seed there is a stem
And from the stem there is a leaf
And from the leaf there is hope that Swaying tree will return again.
- by crazytrainXD |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/29/2008 |
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- Title: Swaying tree
- Artist: crazytrainXD
- Description: i really wasn't literally picturing a "Swaying tree" when i wrote this, i was looking at polotics and the world. the trees and such are symbolic.
- Date: 12/29/2008
- Tags: swaying tree
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Miss Salsa Sam - 01/01/2009
- it has a very good meaning. Its a good piece and you should keep writing. I hope you follow your desire to write. Umm a few things to work on is be more clear with you rymes and patters but all together great. (one thing leads to another) that is the meaning i understood. you are right trees are very symbolic. THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS!
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- EmeraldxTurtle - 12/29/2008
- very cool. i love the symbolism of it all. 5/5
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