Rain

• Artist: Salty Period
• Description:
• Date: 12/28/2008
• Tags: rain

I saw it was raining
And ran outside
I walked into the park
enjoying the rain

I saw lot of couples
running to get some cover
At that I realized
I'm alone

I sat on the ground
leaned my head down
I started crying
My pants got wet
My shirt as well

Out of the blue
I didn't feel the rain anymore
I looked forward and saw that it was still raining
I looked up and saw an umbrella

I turned around and saw a guy
He was reaching his hand towards me
I placed my hand on his hand
He helped me up

We walked into a shed
I sat on a broken table
I was shivering
He brought me a blanket
And wrapped me inside it

I started crying again
He sat behind me
Wrapped his arms around me
And kept me warm

I closed my eyes
and opened them again
I saw
that I was at the same spot
where I sat and started crying

I realized
That it all was in my thoughts
I stood up
And ran home

Comments

[Xx_iRainbow_Skittles_xX]

That's depressing, but really touching. 5'd.

[Hermera Nyx]

This sounds like it could have been elaborated on a little more and turned into a story. I personally think it would have worked better that way. But this is well-written, and I like it. 4/5

[Xx midnight soul xX]

crying that is so sad. i love it though amazing i give it a 5/5