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One sole figure sitting alown
holding a name not yet known,
And this poor lad's gender's meil
porcelain facade behind darkness veil,
worn black satin against glass skin,
No one yet had seen his grin.
His mind forever in everlasting mourn,
And yet, he spoke. " I wish I never been born."
And then his hand pulled out a shiny new friend
to stop the pain without an end.
Lower and lower the thin metal came.
Once again, everything had stayed the same.
Now his snow white wrist lay dripping rubies.
Every bead spilling his gloomy agonies,
With every moment came a light so bright.
A vivid pool would be made tonight.
- by -PaReLiSiTy_RaInS- |
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- | Submitted on 12/28/2008 |
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- Title: The Emo
- Artist: -PaReLiSiTy_RaInS-
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This is a poem that I did for my cousins english assignment. It is based of of Chancer's style. (Not sure if I have the name right.... Oh well, it something like that.)
P.S. The misspelled are suppose to be like that
CRITICISM IS WELCOME! DON'T BE AFRAID TO TELL ME THAT IT SUCKED OR GIVE ME SOME HARSH ADVICE. I CAN'T GET ANT BETTER WITHOUT IT. THE KNIFE IS WANTED AND WELCOMED.... - Date: 12/28/2008
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- trix_intrepid - 12/28/2008
- This is dark and dismal but yet I felt really melodic while reading it...
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