Don't Fail Me

• Artist: whitejade13
• Description: Figure it out.
• Date: 12/27/2008
• Tags: failure

I've realized the world isn't always kind.
Good people are hard to find.
I hope someone keeps me in mind.
Please oh please don't fail me.

Evil falls on me in a shower.
Will you help me climb life's tower?
Be my rope, be my power.
Please oh please don't fail me.

The bridge is broken, no one's here.
I'm falling now, filled with fear.
Down my cheek falls a single tear.
I'm gone now, you've failed me.

Comments

[Dimitri279]

I love it. Beautiful.

[vampiress_of_the_dark]

i love all ur poems

[Cottoncandyocbra3]

I'd cry a million tears for you, but my well is dry. cracked and broken system fails, as I lay down to die. Just a little poetic response... This is another excellent poem,. 5/5. I understand your pain.

[Nochs]

amazing, I'm rather at a lack of words for this one, absolutely stunning.

[Scarlet Wrath]

Beautiful, the absence of power can lead to a shattered dream. Same goes with the dawning of power. That's the never ending life cycle, we can see light as being our savior, but in the end most people die trying (Same goes for darkness.) I see this poem as a mystery, in a way you can ignore evil and spawn good, but that would be risking your own life knowing that either side might just be an illusion, and you're left with nothing. It's pure balance.

[DiexToxSurvive]

oh thats really good! 5/5