Accept My Wings

• Artist: IkuXYori
• Description: this poem was based on when people are alone without anyone to talk too.
  I did my best so you may comment on how you think of it.
  
  Thank You.
• Date: 12/24/2008
• Tags: accept wings dream

I fly towards the light,
That shines in the far away sky, but

The cold rain wets my wings,
And I'm alone again today

I'm waving like these ripples
The far memories in my heart

Right now, I just want to sleep
Inside this transparent wind and accept these wings.

I look for the whereabouts of the destiny I was left in charge of
A single falling feather

Someday, surely, I'll reach
The place where my heart will heal

The eyes that look upwards reflect,
The pieces of saddness that we pick up

Forever is sad and endless
And i might long for it

Dreams are the mirage, even now,
They are secretly, fleetingly, blooming somewhere

Comments

[AluminumNightmare]

i like it. good job!

[JessicaRayDiantAngel]

This is lovely!

[xl Cyanide Candy lx]

Aww it's so sad. T^T I imagined it as a little bird who can't find its way back to the nest and it's all windy and raining. D:

[Seras_Victoria12485]

It's good, needs some work, but good.