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We were both young when
I fist saw you and he walked towred
me and said hello little did I know
he was the one i wanted forever
no one else made me feel this way
the feeling of a thousand butterflys
in one case inclosed untile the right moment
he was my prince and I was his princess my
daddy said stay away from Tinzing and I was on the
satir case begging you please dont go and I said Uriel take me
some where we can be alone I will wait for you forever if
I have to my love. Uriel save me there trying to tell me how to feel
this kind of love is hard but its real they can all feel it I can tell
but dont be afired well make it out of this.For a few days he was gone
and I said "Uriel save me Ive been feeling so alone I ceep waiting but
you never come is this real or just in my head I had know idea what was going on it scared me I thought it was over and he wispered in my ear "Dont worry Tinzing you never have to be alone Ill stay with you untile the end of time I promise you that, I love you and thats all I really know"Because we were both young when I first saw you.

- Title: This is my love story
- Artist: Tinzing
- Description: Okey i know that I took some lines form the sog Love Story but thats ok but I know Ive told other peoples storys but this one is mine ok comment please
- Date: 12/24/2008
- Tags: love story
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Mattation4ever - 12/28/2008
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roses are red violet are blue
you are happy
and i am so
crappy. good poem. sorry again. goodluck - Report As Spam
- Takashi Kyo - 12/24/2008
- it is mediocre at best. it had many spelling mistakes and all in all did not seem like it took much thought. if you are going to copy another song then it wont sound original and it wont seem like it is coming from you.
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