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When you fall in love, you heart gets poundy
You eyes become googaly
And it is just so hard to breath when your near that person
You go crazy just to impress
And you act stupid when you feel in love
But it is all worth it.
Death is when you heart stops
You become pale
Your face has no emotion
And you eyes become gray
You stop in the middle of life.
And remember all of your life
The love
The happiness
The sadness
The good and the bad
And while you flashback...
You die.
For life is just time
The good and bad
The loves and the heartbreaks
Enjoyable and the dreadful
The stuff you don't want to remember
Life goes on 'til you die
And you will never forget it
Never
Never
Remember forever.
- by DevilsDonut |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/24/2008 |
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- Title: Love, Death and Life.
- Artist: DevilsDonut
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Love
Death
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Life - Date: 12/24/2008
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Xxhells bloodxX - 06/01/2009
- well not all of it is so true but its what u feel soooo.... nice poem
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- Jeyrin - 12/27/2008
- great job, but it could use a but of editing, maybe? 3/5 for now, but you're a great poet, I'm sure. Don't let that discourage you. Follow this link to the gallery of my mule account so you can rate back? http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/gallery/?uid=12171869
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- _Roooose_ - 12/24/2008
- smile Great poem.
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