You & Me

• Artist: 4eVa-HiS-aNgEl
• Description: just a little some thing i wrote in my spare time on the phone with my love.
• Date: 12/22/2008
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heart Our love is ever lasting;
as is our friendship.
heart As we get closer and closer i realize,
that this is true love.
heart When he first said "I love you" i was startled,
but know feel the same.
heart He is my life, every thing i need;
he is every thing i have ever wanted and more.
heart When i look into his eyes,
every object disappears.
heart When we kiss,
it's like a light has been turned on in the darkness of the world.
heart I love him, and he loves me:
that's all that i need.

Comments

[Ris Bara]

Oh wow! This is lovely, it's exactly how I feel for my beloved <3

[ShadowRiderShiraku]

pretty good. the "turn on in the darkness" thing was pleasingly creative.

[mitsumiko-minase03]

it's kind of cliche for a love poem but i think you did a pretty good job working at it.