Freedom

• Artist: much ado about nothing
• Description: Just this poem I wrote a long time ago. I like the first bit but I'm not too sure about the last. Comments, critique?
• Date: 12/22/2008
• Tags: freedom poem rhyme

Are you truly free? Are you? Am I?
The way that prisoner doth lie
Gentle, Calm, Happily
Yet he has faced much difficulty
Bound in chains for no good reason
Shouts of 'Treason! Treason, Treason!'...
Though he remains
Bound in chains
He remains
Without pains
Free for the rest of eternity

Comments

[nones here anymore]

i like the whole thing.

[rileyzworld]

cool 5=)