Blood Stained Eyes

• Artist: SickRo_K_R
• Description: Just a little something I wrote for my band.
• Date: 12/22/2008
• Tags: blood stained eyes song

It hurts and yet you listen still
Their words cut deep enough to kill
Voices heard, they keep you lured
You've lost all hope, the knife blades will

Hold on, the hurt will end
When he comes your heart will mend
To ease the pain
Chase night away
In those eyes your hope lies
Lost in troubled skies

The rain falls down, steady as your tears
As you give in to all your fears
The blade breaks your skin
Your blood flows as nightfall nears

Hold on, the hurt will end
I will come, your heart will mend
To ease the pain
Chase night away
In these eyes your hope lies
Lost in troubled skies

I won't give up(not giving up)
I won't give in(not giving in)
Death rides on swift wings(death comes)
Drift away, don't go, I'll stay

Comments

[Roboticyouth]

so emo.
at least its got a semi-decent scheme 3/5

[PinkFire07]

this could be a song.
good job.
Dont really like the end, but its still amazing.

[SickRo_K_R]

Thanks!

[n such]

Wow this is really good. I'm a writer sort of poet and I really wish I was a musician sort of poet. I'm super jealous. I can imagine this sounding really good. It's really nice how you keep going back to blood and night. I hope it turns into a lovely song smile