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There once was a girl
Always smiling
Always bright
In one day
That was all snatched away
Everything turned dark
Her smile faded
And turned fake
The people who notiched
She pushed away
She started to fall
Falling into depths of darkness
She became scared and
Started yelling for help
Yelling until her voice became horse
But no one came
She started to cry
Crying until her eyes were dry
So she raised the cold blade to her throut
Tear running down her face
She puched the blade to her throut
Blood went everywere
Then lieing in a pool of her own blood
She used her last breath to say her final words
And with a smile on her face
She said
I Am Finally Free
- by Kodocha_Sana |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/20/2008 |
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- Title: Pain that was never known
- Artist: Kodocha_Sana
- Description: It's about suicide but please don't ask me why I wrote this...
- Date: 12/20/2008
- Tags: pain never known
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Comments (7 Comments)
- DaydreamersCosplay - 12/18/2009
- It's very nice. I am a bit like this poem ,though. Sometimes I think Death would be a great friend to me. Not being a critic but you misspelt Noticed Throat and Laying. So my English teacher has gotten me into this bad habit. But no the less I love your poem.
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- Kodocha_Sana - 04/11/2009
- Thank you really, I am so glad you all like it
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- animewolf16 - 04/05/2009
- I love the end
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- Kodocha_Sana - 03/18/2009
- To be pefectally honest I based this poem on myself and my pain
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- Dasuna - 02/19/2009
- It's very heart touching...and some what saddening...It makes you wonder if there was anything that someone could have done for this little girl...Aww I feel even more saddened...
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- Kodocha_Sana - 12/21/2008
- thank you smile
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- keith_alex17 - 12/20/2008
- its cool
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