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Flying higher than a kite,
She says she's alright...
But you know the truth.
She's hurting, she's bleeding,
She's wanting, she's needing
And there's not a thing you can do.
She wants you, she needs you,
You turn her away.
There's not a thing in the world
That could make you stay.
You want her, you need her,
The world keeps going on.
You opened up, then got shot down,
And now you know she's gone.
Forever and ever
She'll love you forever
But you have another plan.
You'll leave her, Decieve her,
and think its just fine...
Whatever happens now,
She's sure to survive.
It's the last straw,
That's all she can take.
She pulls out that knife-
Her life is at stake.
She pauses for a moment,
Battling with strife,
Then makes a quick decision,
And readies her knife.
Just one big incision
Will forever end her life.
Was it worth it to you?
Doing what you did?
Can you now see her pain?
All the things that she hid?
They're written across her body
For all to see:
"I love him, but he doesn't love me."
Do you feel guilty?
Even in the least?
Or is this what you wanted:
Her life to be ceased?
Wishes, wishes..
Unattainable at best.
She'll never live again,
Just lay her to rest.
- by Homemade Homicide |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/20/2008 |
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- Title: The Ceased, Lay Her to Rest.
- Artist: Homemade Homicide
- Description: Just a poem I wrote... It isn't aimed at anyone. Just pain on paper.
- Date: 12/20/2008
- Tags: ceased rest
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Comments (5 Comments)
- xXx__Misguided Ghost__xXx - 08/15/2011
- That was GREAT!!!! To me it sorta sounded like a husband cheating on his wife.....and she killed herself out of pain.... Sad,but AWSOME!!!!
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- Homemade Homicide - 12/26/2008
- Thank you guys. ^^ There are a couple of other poems in my Journal if you want to read them. mrgreen
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- Fraziek - 12/24/2008
- wow this is totally amazing smile
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- Guard13007 - 12/21/2008
- Absolutely the best poem I've ever read so far, and the three line verses don't ruin it.
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- PaperSongs - 12/20/2008
- Possibly one of the best poems we've read here. Yes, all the voices are accounted for today. Every time you put only three lines in the verse though it sort of ruined it. You ruined your flow that way but you have some brilliant imagery and word usage. It was brilliant! 5/5
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