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In the subtle dark moment,
I found there wasn't any chance,
For I cannot withstand it all,
And I was blinded by false words.
Through tortured nights of hopelessness,
They screamed at me with no mercy,
And I, abused, had looked away,
Telling myself I'd be alright.
Then I left and tried so hard,
Pushed myself far past the limit,
Broken bodied, holding on,
I looked within for assurance.
I've always been my own support,
I've been alone, until that day,
I met someone who said those words,
That made my heart jump instantly.
You see, I am a fool, for I,
Am hurt by words you know so well,
But this concept I had not known,
For it has not applied to me.
Those words, however, are a curse,
They hurt far worse than broken bones,
They break my heart and make it bleed,
And now I cannot stand to bear.
I see that I am far too weak,
Against these words, there is no hope,
I want to run so far away,
Just so they will not reach me.
When I had heard you say those words,
I didn't want them to be true,
It would have been better at the norm,
But you had to go and say those words...
I love you...
And then...
It was over...
- Title: Don't Say Those Words...
- Artist: Razetto
- Description: I don't know if I've submitted this on any of my other accounts, but... this is more of a personal poem relating to my own feelings. Personally I just don't like hearing the word love, but that's a matter of my own. ^^;; I'm hoping maybe someone might relate to this somehow, but it might be a false hope.
- Date: 12/20/2008
- Tags: dont those words
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Comments (4 Comments)
- ScreamJuliet - 02/23/2009
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well i can really relate to your poem
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- Razetto - 12/21/2008
- no, of course not. That's why I wrote this poem, and I suppose if people with your opinion suck, then so do I, but you're not the only one that feels like that. Love is just something people want to believe in because it sounds so good, in my opinion, but love actually constitutes betrayal and lies.
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- The_Dying_Breed - 12/20/2008
- I get it and i don't believe that true love has ever existed like some say hate is a four letter word and love a four letter lie ^-^ i suck don't i
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- kiraryu1 - 12/20/2008
- I know how you feel. I think this poem is amazing. Its painfully true.
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