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when the time comes to put up the tree
u know santa is to come and put
presents under the chrismas tree
while little kids snooping around the presents
but one thing they don't know is santa is watching day and night
through the cold snow and sleet santa is always coming to the TOWN
when little kids sleep
- by i_rawr_kool_aid |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/20/2008 |
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- Title: chirmas day
- Artist: i_rawr_kool_aid
- Description: idk
- Date: 12/20/2008
- Tags: chrismas
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Comments (6 Comments)
- _Roooose_ - 03/17/2009
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Ok, it sucks xD
The spelling,
the constant use of 'tree',
'U' instead of 'you'?!
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- Sunafire - 02/22/2009
- Cute smile
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- Farrelei - 01/04/2009
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1. You incorrectly spelt Christmas in the title. Bad first impression.
2. You used 'u' instead of 'you' in the poem. I thought this was the writing competition? You used chat spak.... In a writing competition. No.
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- i_rawr_kool_aid - 01/01/2009
- if u don't like it don't read it and stop look
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- iiRawk_skinniezz - 12/22/2008
- stop using tree god damn it
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- SmileCute12 - 12/22/2008
- mayb u should use more colorful words and not repeat the tree over and over again =D
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