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Excuse me my darling,
is it true?
That am living without you?
That you aren't next to me anymore?
It feels as if it was yesterday,
the day you were with me.
I was happy for once, cant you see?
Before, a glance of you would bring tears to my eyes,
and everyday I wished I would die.
But then I saw that light,
and it made me want to hide.
But it was you, and you were true,
and that I cant deny.
But I cant take it in,
when you don't feel within,
the love I feel for you.
Is it true, my feelings for you?
Can I accept the fact that its true?
That I finally realize....
I Love You.
- by elevator love letters |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/20/2008 |
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- Title: Is It True?
- Artist: elevator love letters
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Description:
This is what happens when a girl like me gets bored!
Its SUPER Corny if you ask me...but I guess am doing this for fun.
Criticism is accepted...but don't be to cruel, just some little pointers would be fine, and fair rating!
Alright?
Thank you! - Date: 12/20/2008
- Tags: true love poem enigma
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Ino-Shmarie - 12/20/2008
- I love this! Btw, I'm Kiko's sister, so she told me to check you out. THis is great!
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- Sakura-Kiko - 12/20/2008
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OMG, Faith this is great! I love it!
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- xxMyxxFinalxxFantasyxx - 12/20/2008
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I dont think its corny at all!
I think its very sweet!
5/5 - Report As Spam
- baby-bosley - 12/20/2008
- damn i wish i could write like this its really good 5/5
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