the darkness in everyone

• Artist: The Lone Demonic Warrior
• Description: its poem about the darkness and lives in you and how it is in you
• Date: 12/20/2008
• Tags: darkness everyone

You go to sleep having peaceful dreams
you think your safe in your bed in your room
but in realty you are not

there is darkness surrounding you
there is darkness watching you
when you sleep the darkness gets closer

while you sleep the darkness enters your heart
and the darkness enters your soul
the darkness has engulfed you and you dont know it

you awake wishing you were asleep
you see the sun when you walk out and it hurts
you wonder why it hurts when you've seen it so many times

it hurts because of the darkness inside of you
the light from the sun
is trying to destroy that darkness

at times it wins
other times it loses
there will always be darkness inside of you

darkness cannot fade
darkness will never leave
the world will be cover in darkness

the world will be destroy by darkness

Comments

[XxTheNumbOnexX]

Awesome!!! && so true O.O

[xXxFried-CheesecakexXx]

There are some grammar and spelling things that are annoying. I liked all of it except the second like didn't flow right. You might want to change it to "You think you're safe in your bed."

[vivalajamz]

It's good.
Truthful.
Although there are some mis-spellings and grammer errors.
Other than that it's great smile