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When Christmas comes near,
I dread this every year.
I shed some tears.
I cry because I lost you,
even if you knew.
I still must say, I love you, too.
Now since your in the ground,
I must keep keep in bounds,
from the reasoning for that sound.
A crashing boom,
That ends with doom.
Now, im in my room.
I cry,
I die.
In that room,
It ended in a big boom,
And same it ended with doom.
I killed myself so I could be with you,
Now I'm going to regret it just like too.
When, I Killed myself that was a dream,
But, you were still creamed.
By that car is what it was.
Now, we make a big fuss.
And we are so sad.
To bad it had to end.
It ended with you.
;-;

- Title: It'll fade not today, but...
- Artist: Laters
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Description:
Someday it may, but it will not be soon.
:-: - Date: 12/18/2008
- Tags: itll fade today
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Comments (6 Comments)
- RoxenXIII - 12/18/2009
- I really liked it though there were a few errors but it was very powerful writing as my english teacher would say.
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- Aaron_Fans - 01/22/2009
- So good! I have to put this to my favorite
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- _Roooose_ - 12/29/2008
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Best line ''it ended with you'' ;D
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- Dragon_Fears - 12/18/2008
- i agree its powerful
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- Mud99 - 12/18/2008
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I have nothing to say..........
CAPTAIN PLANET!!!!!!! - Report As Spam
- averywind - 12/18/2008
- powerful, some errors. reread it. good rhyming. 4/5
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