Winter

• Artist: Elaine - sugar high
• Description: this is a form of haiku, i doubt it is any good. i wrote it out of boredom. =P doesnt every1? and of course, its extremely short, as is haiku.
• Date: 12/17/2008
• Tags: winter snow

White slowly falls
Covering up everything
Welcoming Winter

Comments

[bloodtearrose]

I... It... Where is the mystic?! That is a haiku but it is similar to oh I dont know...
There is a fly here,
I smash it between my palms,
my children watched me.
I'm sorry but in all honesty 2-5
Comment back Honestly?
http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/poetry-and-lyrics/vote/?entry_id=102252211

[PetitEspoir]

its too wrapped in cotton! but it has very good potential