Fade Away

• Artist: Cottoncandyocbra3
• Description: Something else...
• Date: 12/16/2008
• Tags: fade away

Fade Away

I never thought that you'd be one of them, Atop the list of things that used to be my soul,

Held together by the illusion, that nothing else is going to break away and fold,

I burn my eyes to halt insanity, As you fade into the dusk,

I never thought you would hold on to them, The string of dreams that break the mold,

Floating on top of images, pictures of chasing time into it's golden sanctuary,

I burn my ears to stop calamity, as you fade into the ash,

I always thought you would be there for me, Keeping me alive in times of need,

You crossed the line and tore away, Called me out and stole my only reality,

I kill my mind to stop this travesty, As you fade into your death.

Comments

[whitejade13]

Oh my. This is very...... God i despise using the word deep, but it is. Your choice of vocabulary in this poem is amazing. Trully wonderful. 50000/5

[Sorceress_Wakaru]

The words you used are too deep for everyone, I think. Your poetry says that someone had died and that person is important to you. You could not let go of him because you held special feelings for him. Am I right?

[iiReina]

awesome

[Bleuraven123]

hm.. its great and all but may i ask one thing? sweatdrop
what exactly is fading away here? cos its deep and all... biggrin

[Emo_Wuvs_Haylie]

i like this, the search of a way out, a subject i am familiar with. relatable to as well, but as mud99 says it doesnt quite flo the way it should so i give it 4/5

[Mud99]

Moving. Doesn't flow as well as it could. 4/5