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Bright light chasing me
Coughing my way out
Door after door the light is still following me
Heat is rising and smoke fills the rooms
As I round the corner for the exit I hear a slight cry
I stop and turn to the light
I must run to the light and the crying
The light gets hotter as I get closer
The cry of scared, frightened and trapped gets louder
My hair is now curling in the heat
I turn to a door that is closed with the cries inside
I back up and run as fast as a cheetah towards the door with my shoulder
The cries are coming from a little girl holding her doll
The ceiling is about to collapses
I grab her and jumped out the window
I put her down and collapsed
As I closed my eyes the little girl hugged me as saying thanks for saving me
That was the very last thing I saw

- Title: Defore I Died
- Artist: akangel94
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Description:
it came 2 me in class while talking 2 a friend
also this is my first time posting in wrighting befor but hay i hope u like it as much as my friends did
- Date: 12/15/2008
- Tags: beore died
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Comments (5 Comments)
- `Shangri-La - 07/07/2009
- Not the *best* spelling and grammar, but I like the overall idea and theme of this piece. Great job, 5/5.
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- Chrona_13 - 05/13/2009
- It almost sounds like Emily Dickinson. Good job. 5/5.
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- queen siva - 03/04/2009
- you have very poor grammar
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- reapers assistant - 01/16/2009
- Collapses?
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- imstupidmandii - 12/17/2008
- this is awsome ali
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