Every Lie was just too good

• Artist: TiKKa576
• Description: Title pretty much explains
• Date: 12/14/2008
• Tags: lies were just good

Every lie was just too good
Every promise just too believable
Every caress just too trustworthy
Every kiss just too breathtaking

He was so perfect
She was so convinced
He was so deceitful
She was so forgiving

They were so happy
They were so broken
They were so unforgetable
They were just a memory

Every lie was just too good...

Comments

[DDrox316]

I like this (:
but I think it might be more effective if you talked in first person... Idk, it's just my opinion but i think it might be more powerful

[Rion Longinus]

Thats true indeed... -_-

[queen_of_night8]

so good
and emotinal