I am

• Artist: Loading_Done
• Description: An "I Am" Poem
• Date: 12/13/2008
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I am not a lonely person
I how a lot of respect
I help many people
I sleep a very long sleep
I dream of a perfect world
I rain down peace
I save the world from harm
I stop to smell the flowers
I remember those in need
I ask others how they are
I expect a lot of great things
I mean no harm to people
I promise to be a good person
I am not a lonely person

Comments

[Silver Moon Flower]

just wondering is the 'I how' on the second line suppose to be 'I have' just a question but I love the poem good job biggrin

[chrisdadog5]

Um, that's how an "I am" poem is supposed to be. An "I am" poem has an "I" at the start of each sentence.

[darkangel9194]

There are way to many 'I's so it doesn't really flow.