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Moast fear this but i accept the truth that it will consume us all.
DEATH
Death is waiting for your soul and shall not rest till it locks it away
You have sinned and your time must be served
the gates of hell are open, calling your name
there is no excape from the lies you have told
and the sins you have commited
death is already at your bed side
do not fight, for it is useless
just give in adn pay for your misdeeds you have done
you can feel your stenght leave to and the cold seting in
the shadows around you do not weep at your demise
for you have wronged them so many times
for that death will not lock you in a cage of fire
but in a cage of ice
for that is what you did to the shadows of your life
death is reaching his hand out to you
now you flout above your badly and you look down
relizing the mistakes you have made
but your time is done
there is no excape from the cluches of death
down throught the gates of Hell he takes you
in to the cage of ice you have forged
there to rot in your cage for all enternaty

- Title: DEATH
- Artist: Kalvorack
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Description:
This is the tipe of writing that i enjoy
JUST SO YOU KNOW THIS IS NOt FOR THE FAINT OF HEART - Date: 12/13/2008
- Tags: death
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Paper Crane Kiko - 03/18/2009
- what the hell do you mean 'poser'? i mean i like it.......... i agree: SPELL CHECK!!!!!!!! god i love spell check..... neways work a lil more and we'll see......
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- Lady Erudessa - 12/20/2008
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. . . hmmm. . . There's something that's bothering me about it.
I don't know what it is.
Whatever!
I like it, and just like Jackie Nemo suggested, spell check and it'll be perfect.
Good job. - Report As Spam
- Jackie Nemo - 12/15/2008
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I suggest using spell check befor you post your poems.
Besides that I think it's good. 3/5 - Report As Spam
- Bananasticker - 12/14/2008
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hmmm
poser - Report As Spam
- CALIFORNIAHxC - 12/14/2008
- this is pretty good.(not the best)but good. and i think the same thing in my when i wake up
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