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Love is just a word. A silly word to give people hope.
Hope is just a figment of the imagination to let us dream.
Dreaming is an ecstasy that dies when you wake.
Death is a nightmare, ending the happiness given by this word.
So when this simple word is said to give you hope, your dreams will come true only to be killed by the rise of the sun, and the death of your nightmares will end the hapiness you get by the word love[/b].
- by SceneTeenRainbowRaver |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/13/2008 |
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- Gardeford Superior - 10/15/2010
- clap. Well played.
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- Sparkly Tits - 01/27/2009
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wow thats really deep O.O so are you saying im gonna die in love O.O;;;
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- Golden Sarah-Belle - 12/13/2008
- sorta emo.... but i like it well enough. i think you need to work on the last bit. my middle school english teacher always told me "show, don't tell," and i think thats one of the best things i ever took from 7th grade english. biggrin show us what your feeling, or what you want us to feel. dont spell it out for us. 4/5
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