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In my room here lying in my bed,
Waiting for you to arrive,
But you never did,
I am here dying and cutting myself,
You dont give a damn,
Might as well kill myself,
If you don't care why should I?
You are the only one I love with all my body and heart,
If I don't have you I dont have anyone,
Do you love me anymore?
- by iDepressedofLife |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: Love or Kill Me...
- Artist: iDepressedofLife
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Description:
Basically what I have been feeling...
=/ - Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: love kill
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Comments (4 Comments)
- xXRhama_ZuriXx - 12/19/2008
- I loved the emotion behind the words. I would advice expanding your writing topic, though. Overall I thought you did a wonderful job.
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- bonnie505 - 12/13/2008
- i agree with both,i use to feel that.there's always other options
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- -x- Fridge -x- - 12/13/2008
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I'm sorry but I didn't care for that.
I think you have a real talent. Just work on your phrasing and expand your writing subject beyond the "I'm not loved" feeling. I bet you could write something absolutely fantastic! I believe in you! - Report As Spam
- P-Railion-U - 12/12/2008
- wow
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