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Do you really think that knife in my back can stop me?
You should have took more measures,
to make sure that I stay knee deep in piss,
because now I'm transcending to my rightful place.
You better sleep with both eyes wide open,
because the distance between me and you is closing,
I'm coming to cut off your forked tongue!
and after all that has happened, I have to say thank you,
because each scar you have given me only progressed my ascent.
Exhale, breathe, and focus
hatred can be forged into the perfect weapon,
when it is used to reap the benefits.
Your fragile ego is so transparent,
shatter now your shards will no longer cut me.
On your knees usurper
now kiss my ring,
and be forgotten.

- Title: Its Vengeance Nonetheless
- Artist: Awean
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Description:
Well it's real title is "The Betrayer's only fear is Caïna".
ummmm.....its pretty straight forward, and its not all that complex.
Obviously its about betrayal, but it also about growing stronger as life goes on.
hmmm...wll i hope guys like it....and plz don't eat me if you hate it. If you don't like it just rate and move on. okay, plz enjoy. - Date: 12/11/2008
- Tags: vengeance nonetheless
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Chiyuki_Haruhi - 12/12/2008
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good!!!
and i dont say that a lot for writing - Report As Spam
- akatsukigrlX - 12/11/2008
- its good! there are a few grammar errors, but other than that the concept is great and the writing is good too! xD
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