you suck

• Artist: daddysbabylovesmoney
• Description: this song was made for a boy who acted like he liked me and broke my hart... and played whith my fellings
• Date: 12/11/2008
• Tags: love boys

twisted im in the dark im all a lone.i here my hart its beting like crazy.i see your face your every were i look.what do you whant do you whant. do you whant me? do you my whant money?thats to bad i can only geve you one thing thats my love only my love.it maye be dark but lats even better. my hart belongs to you now. you better take care of it. my life is in youer hands.im in love wheth you.but you dont love me back.you get youer gang and tret me like trash.i act like i dont even care but in side my hart is dies .y dont you love me i gess im ugly .BUT NOT AS UGLY YOU.NOT AS DUMB AS YOU.YOUER SUCH A GRECK THATS Y YOU DONT WORK. we all agery that i can do better than you...better than you....

Comments

[Cafekko Glitch]

I agree.. Somebody with such a great motive for writing sure has bad spelling.

[shaun_888]

no offense but yeahhhh why didn't you check you're spelling

[AlexisUchiha]

Nya...
It's a very sad song I'll say, BUT I have a hard time reading things with TONES of spelling mistakes. I don't mean to be a critic, but you should use spell check or something.
Still, I think this is really sad none the less. I hate boys like that!

[blinkNwink]

Nice, but there's still room for improvement.

[SignorMELP01]

I loved it!!!!!!!
Try to work on your formatting, and your spelling, I can even help if you want, or ask a friend, or go to dictionary .com
It was very amazing, you just need to remember that after a comma you need to set that new piece of the sentence into a new line.
Sorry if I sounded like a teacher, it's just that I love poetry and I also have a very big bad habbit to help people even when I can't even help myself.

[xPeaceLoveBieberx]

thats cool