- Theres no one here to talk to and the pain inside is starting to make me numb. Ive got something to say but no one to say it to. Im not supposed to be afraid of anything, but i just dont know how to take this feeling. Im wishing i could run away from this, but im exhausted and no body understands how i feel. Every thing they say seems to cut right through me and i begin to bleed. I dont care what they think but it hurts to know im truley nothing to anyone...... not even myself. Now im searching for somthing that i cant find. Is it to far away out of sight?, or maybe im just blind.
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- | Submitted on 12/10/2008 |
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- Title: Or maybe im just blind
- Artist: Yami Yufakai
- Description: a poem about not understanding this world and what ppl make it..... what they make you
- Date: 12/10/2008
- Tags: maybe just blind
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Comments (7 Comments)
- kage kokoro 10 - 01/08/2011
- Dang its been so long since i lost this account XD, my "yami yufakai" era was a good one
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- ThE_eBiL_pOcKy_GoD - 12/14/2008
- Nice poem wink
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- Koemy-chan - 12/13/2008
- *ignoring the bottom guy* (yeawn!~) true not every one knows how the world goes....
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- LadyKrystine - 12/12/2008
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Uhm, there's a lot of punctuation mistakes, capitalization that was missed, and some spelling errors that kind of derail the flow and meaning of it. It sounds all depressing, like a lot of other stuff I've read on this site and others. Nothing original, but good.
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- Cottoncandyocbra3 - 12/11/2008
- You are blind! This is weak poetic garbage, dear sir. You misspelled "truly". It felt repetitive, and failed to impress me. 1/5.
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- Smelly Toast - 12/10/2008
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Nice. That's all there is to It. :]
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- hellgirl1218 - 12/10/2008
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Awsome poem as usual. Really makes people open their eyes. ^-^
*points to comment below me* Agreed. - Report As Spam
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