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He ran through the snow,
His sword strapped in a sheath,
he ran.
Vincent threw off his cape,
took out his sword in a blink,
his boots making a slight clink.
Cristal stood before him,
Dieing on a sword,
He raged.
Vincent stood and felt rage,
his lover slain,
he went insane.
Vincent battled mercilessly,
slaying all before him,
before he felt the colt tounge on his back.
He had been killed,
Slain and sent to hell,
as he fell the devil wept.
Vincent took to the throne,
the devil slain,
to rule with his lover.
Vincent was now the evil,
forever to torture his enemies forever.
- by -The_Beast-of_Madness- |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/10/2008 |
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- Title: Vincent & Cristal
- Artist: -The_Beast-of_Madness-
- Description: Just a epic I wrote in my Language arts class, but not the same, for I do not like Rhyming to much, This is an Epic so it is more of a story for you all....
- Date: 12/10/2008
- Tags: vincent cristal
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Comments (4 Comments)
- -The_Beast-of_Madness- - 04/08/2009
- Actually to tell the truth, I kinda remade it the best I could since I lost the original... I got rid of things while cleaning my room, and out went the notebook holding this poem... Its still mine though...
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- whitejade13 - 12/27/2008
- I like it. I too have a problem with repeating a word too much. Usually the word is, now. But it is a very good poem. I think i'd like to read the untoned down vursion. 5/5 Very nice. smile
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- -The_Beast-of_Madness- - 12/10/2008
- Thank you for the criticism.... I do that a lot without even thinking I took out a lot of it for it was about 10 pages long in a note book so I had to tone it down a lot....
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- kryptic_valiance - 12/10/2008
- I think you say "Vincent" to much. Otherwise, it would have been pretty good.
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